Audience Feedback

Audience Feedback

This is our audience feedback,as the had seen our final film. we had asked them about our film and these are the comments they had given us: 

These are the people who had looked at our film and has given us feedback to us.

Studio Ident Analysis

Studio Ident Analysis 

There are many companies in the film industries that have a idents tat represents there own company that they have created.  There are many companies that have there own idents for example the companies names are:

• Disney
• Paramount 
• Warner Brothers 
• Universal  

and there are many more idents but i shall be going through these 4 idents that i have mentioned above. 

Disney:

This ident above is Walt Disney this ident shows us that as it begins it is aimed at the sky with a star showing us that they are aiming high, in addition as it goes on we see a river with high hills which may indicate that they are aiming far. Plus as we go on we see a flag and as it keeps going we see fireworks start going off means that they are exciting and shows that they want people to be attracted with bright colours going off. Lastly as that happens we see the whole castle with a something bright goes around the caste showing that it is special.


Paramount




This is Paramount ident, this ident shows a the clouds with stars coming towards and passing us and going around the mountain. The mountain may indicate that they are aiming high as the mountain is high above the clouds which also shows that they may be a really big company. Furthermore the stars that go around the mountain may suggest that they are special because lots of stars go around the mountain.

Warner Brothers





The Warner Brothers ident indicates that they had started normal by showing factories and then showing s shine of the ident, furthermore as that happens the ident shows that they are in sky which shows that they are bigger than everybody else and showing that they are best of the companies.


Universal


The Universal ident shows as it starts  it shows the world, which may implies that they are out of the world and as the sign comes in the lights of the countries start to turn on, which shows that they light everybody up because they suggest that they make sure that the audience like them by turing there lights on.

Opening Title sequence

Opening Title Sequence 

This clip below of Man of Steel shows the title sequence goes through out the film as our film does. This shows that our film has the same outcome of Man of Steel as the title sequence is the same as it shows from the opening part of the film. 

In our film it is the same as it goes through out the film so the audience will know who has done what instead of putting it at the end because the audience may leave and stop the film at the end because normally people don't like watching the credits at the end of the film.

Title Sequence (order)

Title Sequence 

This is our title sequence which we had put in the film and who it was done by: 

Production Ident

A film by- Jordan Walters 

Starring- Jordan Walters               

               Hassan Kawshar 

               Parveer Mahal

               Sophie Hawkins

Edited By- Parveer Mahal

Cinematography- Hassan Kawshar

Script By- Jordan Walters

Produced By- Hassan Kawshar

                       Parveer Mahal

Directed By- Jordan Walters 

Title.  

This is the order that will be in our film, also it goes in a hierarchy as the producers and the director go at the end of the beginning of the film.  

Choosing your font

Choosing your Font. 

We had used three different types of fonts in our short film so it can make our film more interesting and did not come of word or powerpoint. We had used dafont to make our titles because it has a better  variety of writing types to make our title. 

We had used three different types of fonts and they were: 

• Last day of earth
• Neuorpol
• Zebra  

These fonts made our movie more interesting and gives the audience a better look and so they can see that it is not boring and dull.

This picture above shows our production name and the the type of writing we had used. The type of writing we had used was Last day of earth. This shows that this type of writing is bold and gives a mix of what the film is going to be about. 

Furthermore this picture above shows the other type of writing which we had used and that was neuropol. This type of writing shows that this film may be different as the writing was used, in addition this had writing was going through out the film as is it shows who has done what in the film. 

This last type of writings called zebra, this gave the title a better view of what the film is about and giving the audience what the film a better writing than the dull word writing.  

Speed Of Editing

Speed Of Editing 

There are different types of speed editing there is fast paced,medium paced and slow paced editing. SO in a fast paced editing it has lots of shots in a minute for example in bourne ultimatum they had used many shots in one minute as it has lots of different shots because it is a action film, however in a horror movie they will use slow paced editing as they are keeping the same shot for a long period of time. Furthermore they use it mostly through out the film as they keep it in the same position for a long period of time. 

In action film they will put lots of shots in a couple of minutes as they want to put all the action into one   in this, however if you have a slow paced editing is the shot goes on for a long period of time.   

  

In this clip above shows when Matt Damon as Jason Bourne is trying to find the bad guy, so as that part happens there are lots of shots which are fast as the start to fight. This shows that this movie uses speed of editing as it a action film and the have started to fight.

Finding Music

Finding Music 

We had found different types of music which fit well in our short thriller opening movie. We had used two different types of music which give the audience a chill when it comes on as they try and suspect what is going on in our thriller, furthermore it also gives the audience what is going t happen when the music plays and gives them a intense feeling where the music is playing and why is it playing in that part of the short opening scene. In addition we had used different websites to find the right music and they were youtube and free sfx. These websites gave us a variety of music to choose from but we had picked two which go perfectly into our film.   

As you can see above i had used free sfx and went to the category mysterious and had chosen danger zone as it gives us a intense music. This is type of music gives us a better view of what is happening, furthermore danger zone gives a mysterious way of showing that they may might be the people behind it.      

This is a piece of David Lynch's instrumental this gives us a good dynamic of music and gives a chilly feeling when it starts to play, furthermore this type of music has a better intense music than the others.   We had found this piece of music on youtube.

Continuity Editing

Continuity Editing 

Continuity editing is when you film through out the film with no jump cuts, furthermore this also consists of having the same costume and props through out the film. For example one scene is when they have to wear a blue shirt and then you cannot wear a different shirt they will have to start the film back to the start and film from the beginning. Furthermore continuity editing uses different types of techniques and they are: 

• Diegetic Sound
• Match on action 
• Ellipsis
• 180 degrees rotation  

and there are many more different types of techniques which can be used in continuity editing.

Match on action is when you record a shot in one room and follow through by shooting in a different room. For example if you have someone recording somebody leaving a room and you see them open the door you go to the other side of the door and record them leaving without having any jump cuts in the middle of it, so this has to run in a continuos flow.

This clip above shows a women coming in and going through books then she takes the book opens it and we see what she is reading by a different shot and then another shot looking at her and the book.


180 degree rotation rule is when you start at one side of a conversation and the rotate 180 degrees to the other side and see the conversation at the part, this means that they have to do this regularly every time that one person speaks and o it the other side when the other person speaks.







In this clip above this shows that this movie called the shining uses the 180 degrees rule, however they have broke the 180 degree rule due to the fact that they want to confuse the audience by making them realise what is going on in the film.

Rough Cut

Rough Cut 

This is a out rough cut of our movie, as you can see blow the move goes onto be 4 minutes and 45 seconds on. This insured us to cut done below three minutes, this will make the opening scene better as it will just have the most interesting bits in the film. Furthermore it also will indicate that as it goes on for a long period of time, so the audience may find it boring and may not like certain bits as it may have boring scene which are irrelevant as the opening scene should show the audience what they really want is to be thrilled and be excited. Furthermore this rough cut is not accurate as we still had to add dramatic music to build the tense up and make the audience know what is coming.  

This rough cut has not got the aspects foe our final piece, because this rough cut has a lot of mistakes which we have made during the time we had filiming.

Shooting Schedule

Shooting Schedule

Day	Scene	Location	Equipment	Costumes	Props	Cast +Crew
1 2  3 4 5	Lance Filmore walking up the stairs to the doctors.  Psychiatrist Scene. Park scene. Lance Filmore having a vision when jogger passes by. Waking up scene Walking into the park scene Interrogation/ Confrontation	Stairs next to the study room (Robert Clack Lower School) Study room (Robert Clack Lower School). Central Park (Dagenham) 23 Gerald road (Dagenham, Essex) Central Park (Dagenham) Classroom (Robert Clack Lower)	Camera and Tripod. Camera, Tripod. Camera and Tripod Camera and Tripod  Camera and Tripod Camera and Tripod	Lance Filmore- Blue Jacket, Blue jeans, Casual trainers, and Woolly hat. Lance Filmore- Blue Jacket, Blue jeans, Casual trainers, and Woolly hat. Dr.Khan- Red tie, maroon shirt, blue trousers, black cardigan.  Glasses. Assistant- Black leather jacket, Grey skirt, Black tights and a blouse.   Lance Filmore- Blue Jacket, Blue jeans, Casual trainers, and Woolly hat. Jogger- Red Fila Jacket, Blue adidas tracksuit bottoms and adidas trainers Lance Filmore- Purple pyjamas and Navy slippers.  Interrogator - White Shirt, Black tie, Black trousers and Black shoes. Lance Filmore- Blue Jacket, Blue jeans, Casual trainers, and Woolly hat. Black shoes, Cream shirt. Black tie, Black trousers	Ear phones and a watch Ear phones and a watch  Notepad and a pen. Earphones and a watch. Bed, Phone, Toothbrush, Toothpaste, Bowl, Cereal, Milk, Spoon.   Earphones and a watch. N/A	Jordan Walters Parveer Mahal Hassan Kawshar Parveer Mahal Jordan Walters Sophie Hawkins Parveer Mahal Hassan Kawshar Jordan Walters Jordan Walters Parveer Mahal Hassan Kawshar Parveer Mahal Hassan Kawshar Jordan Walters Parveer Mahal Hassan Kawshar Jordan Walters